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What's the point of love,
When all it brings is pain!
The heart breaks, soul callopses,
Mind tingles, and the tears fall.
The wet warmth of the tears,
Falling slowly down your face.
Falling to your knees in pain,
Fearing the day you fall straight in love.
The look in his eyes you will never see,
Puts a feeling of helplessness in your mind.
When that dream is so close to your heart,
You feel like just ending it all.
But then you'll never see that smile across his face,
That brightens your day as 1,2,3!
1. The smile
2. The eyes
3. The look...
Copyright ©2009 Barbara Hightower
When all it brings is pain!
The heart breaks, soul callopses,
Mind tingles, and the tears fall.
The wet warmth of the tears,
Falling slowly down your face.
Falling to your knees in pain,
Fearing the day you fall straight in love.
The look in his eyes you will never see,
Puts a feeling of helplessness in your mind.
When that dream is so close to your heart,
You feel like just ending it all.
But then you'll never see that smile across his face,
That brightens your day as 1,2,3!
1. The smile
2. The eyes
3. The look...
Copyright ©2009 Barbara Hightower
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Permalink Reply by Krymsen Tears on
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I wrote this for a Valentines Day Poem back in the Ninth Grade. :)
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Permalink Reply by John Pascual on
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:-)
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Permalink Reply by AnGella on
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You did a great job on it!
Wish I knew where my stuff was from back when. -
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I actually remember the very first poem I ever wrote. I wrote it back in 5th grade for an English assignment. It's one of those poems you'll never forget.
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Did you post it?
Krymsen Tears said:I actually remember the very first poem I ever wrote. I wrote it back in 5th grade for an English assignment. It's one of those poems you'll never forget. -
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No. But I can if you wish. :)
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Well of course! Please... you have me all curious now!
Krymsen Tears said:No. But I can if you wish. :) -
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Okay, it has been posted. :)
AnGella said:Well of course! Please... you have me all curious now!
Krymsen Tears said:No. But I can if you wish. :) -
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Permalink Reply by Jasmin Flower on
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Interesting point of view,
maybe when you just got
your heart broken or broke
up with a boyfriend or in a
bad day.
And I liked your idea of the "1,2,3"
Nice job!
~Jasmin! -
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